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A descriptive paragraph about my mother

I choose to describe my mother because she is my role model and someone who will always be by my side. I will start from her appaerance. She usually works out twice a week so she is quite fit. The way I could summarize her looks are just well put together, that means she seems organised and she looks like she knows what she is doing. She always knows how to dress if there is an occasion. She has sparkly eyes and a few freckles on her cheek. Lastly she has red hair and a fringe.  Now let me tell you about her inner qualities. My mom always wants to help who are in need of it. She is just naturally beautiful; it might be because she has confidence. She is great at socialising so I would say she is an extrovert. She is calm and strong in a mental way and I am grateful for that because I can always rely on her. I could write pages about her. I simply appreciate the way she is. 

That is the cake she always made for my birthdays when I was younger.